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You'd always been right there
riveted to my side
as I laughed,
as I cried.

When you first kissed me
it was just as fine
as and kiss
could ever be.
Tender.
Blossoming.
Passionate.
Intense.

Only now, it's much more.
It's like opening
myself as wide as I can
go, and inviting you inside.

You crawl right in, fill me
with love so close to perfect, it seems
I may burst

Have you ever, once in your life
reached up to touch infinity?
©2005-2009 ~bleeder909
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This is about a week old. I am bad at updating when things are actually written.

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i like this, but te ending doesn't really seem to fit. the last stanza, that is. they are great as seperate things, jsut it seems that there is so much mroe to be said in order to tie the last part into the poem's existence

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I felt like putting a bullet between the eyes of every Panda that wouldn't screw to save its species. I wanted to open the dump valves on oil tankers and smother all the French beaches I'd never see. I wanted to breathe smoke.

I wanted to destroy somet
:iconcezukuu:
It's spelled "Infinite," no "A." All "I's."

Not many more comments to be said! Standard sex poetry. XD

You guys are getting serious, huh? Ahh, I'm really so behind...

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:iconbleeder909:
I suck at spelling...I'll fix it.

Yeh, it's not the longest relationship I've had (it probably will be) but so far it's the best.

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I enjoy screaming in the shower because singing is for sane people
:iconcezukuu:
Don't curse yourself before you know the future!

And of course, as I'm sure you know, no one can see the future. :)

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